ext_239918 ([identity profile] ladylotusmoon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jedishampoo 2009-03-29 12:50 am (UTC)

This is so amazing! I love it. The awkwardness and need between the two of them felt so real. Such wonderful descriptions like:

"He leaned a tiny bit away from her, out of her soft orbit of perfume and wet skin and gratitude..."

I read some of the lines out loud so I could savor them a bit more. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! :)

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