sephydark: (cat ears)
sephydark ([personal profile] sephydark) wrote in [personal profile] jedishampoo 2010-05-17 09:51 am (UTC)

I love the way you portrayed their relationship. It's so like them to deny that they love each other, even though it's clear that they do. I also like America's observation at the end about how they can't make the final decisions--it's very true (and seems a bit saddening when you think about it).

Of course, the sex was really hot, too. Mmmm. ^_^

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