Good lord. I do believe this last chapter has gotten me feeling all... 'snuggly' inside. Well, there goes the dignity! The comment at the end was excellent. "We don't make the decisions, we just become them." Good bit of insight, there.
I'll say it again, as well--UKxUS is so much better for your health. x3 "Now I'll get dressed." Ha~ America wants it so much in this fic, he doesn't even try to give any in return. Merely an observation, not a critique--it fits perfectly with how you've written it.
Lol, "DO NOT HOLD. Can you hear the capitals in my voice?" xD Not sure if that was this part or the last part, but it was still rather amusing. A shame it's over, really~
Well, perhaps this has got the creative juices running for my own fic. I'll sleep on it and dream up some new ideas~ (Is it strange I finished this fic in two hours or so? xD Perhaps less. I didn't keep track... )
Mm, and the explaining of why England is so intense makes more sense, now. Not that it didn't before, just that his "so he could see all the little things America did as he climaxed, how his eyes clouded, how his mouth went slack" (I'm paraphrasing, but that's the gist of it) was really a lovely follow-up from the mention, before. And a slightly different use of pet names, as well. Quite adorable. Well. Off to bed, then.
Thank you, really, for writing this~ I needed more UKxUS in my life. :3
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I'll say it again, as well--UKxUS is so much better for your health. x3 "Now I'll get dressed." Ha~ America wants it so much in this fic, he doesn't even try to give any in return. Merely an observation, not a critique--it fits perfectly with how you've written it.
Lol, "DO NOT HOLD. Can you hear the capitals in my voice?" xD Not sure if that was this part or the last part, but it was still rather amusing. A shame it's over, really~
Well, perhaps this has got the creative juices running for my own fic. I'll sleep on it and dream up some new ideas~ (Is it strange I finished this fic in two hours or so? xD Perhaps less. I didn't keep track... )
Mm, and the explaining of why England is so intense makes more sense, now. Not that it didn't before, just that his "so he could see all the little things America did as he climaxed, how his eyes clouded, how his mouth went slack" (I'm paraphrasing, but that's the gist of it) was really a lovely follow-up from the mention, before. And a slightly different use of pet names, as well. Quite adorable. Well. Off to bed, then.
Thank you, really, for writing this~ I needed more UKxUS in my life. :3