Yum! Somehow I think you gave them all a slightly harder edge than I'm used to, but they were still so in character. Totally fits the mood of this story.
I loved all the sounds and smells...and of course the hands(!). :D This is the line that really sticks with me:
Down Sanzo’s thigh, up to clutch his belly, catching every movement of muscle, all Sanzo’s secrets.
Seriously, this was really touching for being rough, angsty porn. The way they could tell without words or sight what the other was thinking and feeling was just so amazing. *sigh* Love it!
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Date: 2008-12-23 05:13 am (UTC)I loved all the sounds and smells...and of course the hands(!). :D
This is the line that really sticks with me:
Down Sanzo’s thigh, up to clutch his belly, catching every movement of muscle, all Sanzo’s secrets.
Seriously, this was really touching for being rough, angsty porn. The way they could tell without words or sight what the other was thinking and feeling was just so amazing. *sigh* Love it!