Ha. I liked England's reaction to that dog. "Stare. Shoo! ...Aw, poor bastard." xDDD From fear to annoyance to pity. Ah, lovely~ You're doing a well good job of the British English, too. What with petrol-station, lift, and a dozen or so other words I can't reel off the top of my head.
Haha, UKxUS is so much fun. Why does (seemingly) the entire fandom love USxUK so much more? Plebs. Love how you're keeping them in character~ And the insecure England thinking how he'll "soon start to feel rejected" because America's putting off the sex. Ah, and he would've started to pout and be generally unpleasant to be around, if it'd continued like that.
Ghost dog was wonderful. Especially since only England can see him... although it's a bit interesting he made the connection so quickly, as when he was at Japan's house and saw the little girl he didn't realize she was a ghost, too... Hmmm~ I'm so pimping part one of this story in the author's note of the second chapter for my USxUK fic. xD (Not USxUK for seme/uke roles, just as an easy way to list the pairing! x.o;;; Gah, I won't know the roles until I get to the sex part of the fic, anyway... )
Sorry. Rambling. I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this, for you~!
Ah! Oh! And have you written for YYH? Your username seems familiar, somehow... Oo;;;
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Date: 2010-05-29 06:10 am (UTC)Haha, UKxUS is so much fun. Why does (seemingly) the entire fandom love USxUK so much more? Plebs. Love how you're keeping them in character~ And the insecure England thinking how he'll "soon start to feel rejected" because America's putting off the sex. Ah, and he would've started to pout and be generally unpleasant to be around, if it'd continued like that.
Ghost dog was wonderful. Especially since only England can see him... although it's a bit interesting he made the connection so quickly, as when he was at Japan's house and saw the little girl he didn't realize she was a ghost, too... Hmmm~ I'm so pimping part one of this story in the author's note of the second chapter for my USxUK fic. xD (Not USxUK for seme/uke roles, just as an easy way to list the pairing! x.o;;; Gah, I won't know the roles until I get to the sex part of the fic, anyway... )
Sorry. Rambling. I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this, for you~!
Ah! Oh! And have you written for YYH? Your username seems familiar, somehow... Oo;;;