This is such a fun read. You wove the setting in such rich detail--I think it's the lingo that really makes it come alive--and it's easy as a reader to become immersed in this world for the duration of the fic. Very nicely done. Characterization and dialogue are tight-polished and spot-on and the Director is awesome--'my guards have very large guns', hee!--and the whole thing is just perfect. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this fic. ^_^
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Date: 2010-10-03 08:21 am (UTC)Also, fetishizing Hakkai's voice? WIN. homg yes, of epic proportions. ♥_♥