Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to give your thoughts! ♥
Heh, I'll admit the "Duh" was especially egregious... but once I made the decision to write America's POV voice as more Hetalia-modern, I just went for it. Perhaps if I write another period piece I'll do it more authentically, to see how it works. :) Thank you again for your honest opinion!
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Date: 2010-11-28 04:37 pm (UTC)Heh, I'll admit the "Duh" was especially egregious... but once I made the decision to write America's POV voice as more Hetalia-modern, I just went for it. Perhaps if I write another period piece I'll do it more authentically, to see how it works. :) Thank you again for your honest opinion!